Thursday, 12 June 2014

unit 22 assignment 2 planning

 Link to the film.

 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lzci4XJc2H0



James likes Lucy, she likes him too but she’s trap in her relationship with Joe. All James wants to speak to  

her but she's always guarded by her controlling boyfriend.
Act 1
James is having breakfast with his friend in costa coffee, across from them is Lucy, reading a book and drinking coffee. James sees her and stares at her intensely, (he disappears into a day dream, finding himself following her in a dark intimately lit hallway dressed in a suit, she’s dressed in a backless dress, walking away from him slowly and seductively implying that he should follow her).
His friend notices that he’s daydreaming and he makes fun of him, he then asks him why he doesn’t just go over and talk to her instead of staring at her from a far range like a freak, James tells him that she’s in a relationship with that douchebag (Joe parker). Lucy gets up, looks at James, smiles at him and walks out of costa and makes her way to her lesson. His friend notices her smile and tells James “ dude she likes you so stop being a frickin ball less miserable idiot and go talk to her, she clearly likes you” James agrees with his friend, he gets up and follows her to talk to her.
Act 2
James goes to talk to her and finds her with her boyfriend outside their classroom, immediately his uplifted and excited spirit drops at the sight of them two, her boyfriend notices how she looks at James so he decided to start on him, they square up to each other but Joe’s friends stops him and tells him that it isn’t worth messing up his hair for, they should fight when he’s brought In his gel so he can fix his hair after the fight.
James walks into the lesson and sits across from Lucy. Alexander Blanco (teacher) walks in and starts his lesson. As he’s teaching James has another of his daydreams but this time, alexander notices him and wakes him up, the whole class laughs.
The lesson ends and Everyone gets to go to lunch and as soon as James sees his opportunity to go and speak to Lucy as she is finally alone and away from that her hair expert boyfriend, his teacher keeps him behind to have a quick pep talk (James needs to really up his grades) (obstacle ,Lucy is getting away and he's missing his chance to speak to her)
During the pep talk, James disappears into another daydream, the teacher wakes him up again but this time James is really confused and frustrated with how he keeps dozing off, he storms out the teachers office and to have some fresh air (LOWEST EBB, HIS FAILING SOME LESSON, HE DIDN’T GET A CHANCE TO SPEAK TO LUCY AND HE HAS BEEF WITH THE HAIR LOVING BOYFRIEND OF LUCY)
Act 3
As he sits down, he looks up and see’s Lucy and her boyfriend arguing, all over sudden her boyfriend slaps her, James sees it and he disappears into another daydream (he’s a superhero on a mission to rescue a girl kept hostage by some evil villain with perfectly combed hair, they have a fight) James gets woken up from his daydream by Lucy and finds himself standing over her douchebag of a boyfriend whom he had hit during his unconsciousness .  
They all find themselves into alexander’s office having to explain exactly what happened, alexander comes to the conclusion that James needs some help with his dreams so he has to see a therapist three times a week, Joe gets banned from using hairspray when he’s in college due to his douchebag attitude , and Lucy gets banned from using her make up because if she didn’t look nice, two boys wouldn’t have fought over her, she has to wear no makeup and come in college looking ugly.
They get dismissed and as James is walking away, Lucy runs after him to thank him for what he did
(saving her) and he finally gets what he wanted all along, to speak to her.

Unit 22/24 my script

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B9VZ_RS4IU4IVWN1c09SOGxOVzA/edit?usp=sharing



unit 16 assignment

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qAOw8FOnrWQ&feature=youtu.be



Friday, 16 May 2014

Assignemnt 22/24 Step by step

EXT - On a road

Max is walking home from college. ( Music Playing )

INT - Max's House 

Max Gets home from college(Dialogue) Makes him self something to eat and turns the TV (Diegetic sound ) ( Dialogue )

INT - HOSPITAL

Jane ( Max's Mum ) Is waiting in hospital for test results of her doctor. Her doctors meets her ( Dialogue ).

INT - Max's house

Max is looking through his Mums open mail he finds one from the hospital. His Mum walks in at the same time as Max is looking through the mail ( dialogue ) because shes drunk spills out that she has cancer.

INT - HOSPITAL

Max goes to speak to his mums doctor. When he find him Max asks him about the cure( dialogue ) Doctor has to let Max down ( Dialogue )

EXT - On a road

Max is looking at the hospital looking for away in. As hes looking for a way in a police car drives past (diagetic sound ) Max goes home. At the same time Dane Phillips is watching him.

EXT - Out side the hospital

Max is back out side the hospital before he breaks in Dane Phillips stops him ( Dialogue ) This is Max's point.








Thursday, 15 May 2014

Treatment

                                                                    Zilch  


Set in modern day times (2014) and out of the blue a German Scientist finds a ‘cure’ for cancer. The world goes mad for the cure Zilch. As the numbers are very high for the cure not everyone can have it, So this causes chaos everywhere. So when people do start getting the cure their cancer goes away. Because when people have cancer they have certain amount of days, weeks, months, years to live so when the cancer goes away and the day comes when they was post to die of cancer the zilch cure doesn’t work and then they get very ill and they die but then because they still have the zilch cure in their system they come back alive but not as normal as a “zombie”


So The Narrative of the story will follow a teenage boy called Max. Max is one of them boys who does everything for him self his family isn't there for him so he is reliant on him self. His Mum Jane Doesn't work but stays at home doing drugs and going out with random men. So when the news breaks that his Mum has Cancer and at the same time the news breaks out there is a cure for it Jane thinks she's in luck and that she has a second chance at life. But cause the cure is so rare Max goes out and tried to find it. He fails at getting the cure but he meets a man called Dane Phillips. Dane Phillips is kind of a shady guy. He sees that Max is trying to break in to a hospital trying to get the cure few days later Dane sees Max again and offers him the cure but max has to do a series of tasks to get it. Max finally gets the cure and gives it his mum and she is cured. Months go by and people start to die of cancer and turn in to zombies. So the world goes to crap and everyone is left to fight for them selves. Max is left to fight for him self but he is out to find Dane Phillips who gave him the cure. Max is out to kill Dane. But it isn't that simple for Max because of the zombies, Max has to find food, shelter and also Dane. 


Monday, 12 May 2014

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